PROLOGUE: TWO DECADES OF AN AMERICAN DREAM; NEW LIFE CARRIED BY THE WIND OF THE PALM-LEAF FAN.
Earth was still again. The awful shaking was over. The terror of thick, thundering darkness was evaporating into the clear night air. Dr. Shin Sun stood high above the city contemplating the skyline from the terrace of his high-rise. He could see for miles. He seemed almost serene as he looked out upon the wreckage.
All around was chaos: piles of broken concrete and glass crushed like eggshells, not more than a handful of buildings still standing amid the debris. Clouds of dust moved across the ruined landscape. Plumes of smokes rode the air aloft. Several streets ahead Shin could see a nine-story apartment building that had completely collapsed upon itself. He thought of the people inside—people he knew—and felt numb. God, it finally happened! After twenty years the prophecy had come to pass. In the blink of an eye the great quake had hit L.A.
The stillness was eerie. Where was everyone? Somewhere in the darkness a dog was howling. Then it stopped. Shin continued to study the scene. He saw power lines and semaphores felled. Freeway overpasses had fallen, and surface streets were cut off or buried under rubble. Sidewalks lay in fragments. The beautiful grid logic of the metropolis had become an incoherent jumble, modern man’s creation jolted out of alignment.
For years seismologists studying the terrain of California had predicted a quake powerful enough to fold the cities of San Francisco and Los Angeles together. “God, were the alarmists right?” Shin wondered, shaking his head. Then his eye caught something. Astonishment froze his features. There, barely visible through the dust, at the base of a low hill where part of old Chinatown had once stood, was an enormous, gaping crack in the surface. Deep inside the fissure was a streak of gold—the unmistakable glint of ore lit by moonlight. An enormous vein of gold had been exposed by the temblor. “It can’t be what it looks like” he said to himself.
A strange feeling came over Shin. He started to remember something that happened to him the night before. Last night begAng Leeke any other night. He brushed his teeth, got himself ready for bed the way he always did. He read awhile, got tired, put down his book, and dropped off. He remembered that he was in the middle of a particularly vivid nightmare when he awoke to find that he had actually fallen out of bed onto the floor. The dream was still playing in his head. It seemed so real. “This is senseless,” he thought. “I felt as if I was being pulled through the surface of some gigantic glass. And I was coughing. I remember I couldn’t stop coughing.”
Shin was losing himself in his thoughts when a voice startled him. The voice was unlike any he had ever heard. It was exquisite, unearthly, and the sound of it brought him sharply back to the moment. He turned to see the person to whom it belonged. It was a woman, preternaturally beautiful and luminous, dressed in Taoist attire. She stood suspended in space, hovering weightlessly, as heedless of gravity as a goddess resting on air. "Shin Sun," she said, "the earthquake has revealed to you the hiding place of the great golden lode.”
Shin hardly dared to breathe. “Am I hallucinating?” he wondered. “Who is she, and where have I heard those words before?” Then Shin’s brain made a connection. He recalled that his great grandfather had once told him about a mine from which a crystal had been extracted—the Ti Yi crystal. His great grandfather had given that crystal to him years ago, but Shin was never sure he actually believed the old man’s tale about where he got it. It was an extraordinary formation just the same. He had never seen anything like it. It had unusual properties. After years of studying it, Shin had been able to harness some of its power for use in a prototype of a new kind of computer. He had named it the “Smart Computer”[NEED BETTER NAME] because it was so sophisticated that it verged on artificial intelligence.
There was a problem with the design, though. The crystal was unique—impossible to replicate. Shin had been able to make only one machine with it. But now his mind was racing toward something: “Great grandpa’s crazy gold mine story—I always tried to get him to tell me where it was and he wouldn’t. If that mine was real, and this is it, and if I could get more of those crystals…” Shin felt a little dizzy at the prospect of creating a network of intelligent computers.
Recovering himself slightly and remembering that he was not alone, Shin turned back to his ethereal visitor. "Who are you?” he questioned. "I am Princess Iron Fan," she answered.” Shin looked at her carefully. He noticed that she was cradling an infant in her arms. The Princess went on: "I knew your great grandfather. It was he who found the crystal in the days he worked for the railroad. Shin Sun, I know your desire,” she added unexpectedly. “I will help you to obtain more crystals, but if I do you must promise me to deliver my baby to his father."
Shin’s overworked brain was spinning out now. Princess Iron Fan? A character from ancient myth? The situation was growing more fantastic by the moment. Shin tried to recollect the details of a book he had read in his youth. West Journey was the epic of Monk Tάng who went in search of wisdom during the Tάng Dynasty around 600 A.D. To further his quest he enlisted the help of a hero known as the Monkey King and formed a fellowship. Shin recalled that the fellowship included other characters called White Dragon, Pigsy, and Friar Sand. “This is nuts,” he thought. “That was a story, a fiction written over a thousand years ago!” Shin stared at his airborne messenger and thought: “Impossible. She’s got to be some kind of hallucination or psychic glitch induced by the trauma of natural disaster.”
Princess Iron Fan went on with her tale: "Monk Tάng and his fellows traveled to the Mountain of Flame. In order to pass through it, they fought with me. They stole my palm-leaf fan and used it to quench the mountain’s fire. But this was not their only crime.” The princess paused briefly for effect. “One of them overcame me and fathered this child. Now, with a mother’s sorrow, I must tell you that I can no longer keep my child.”
“I can’t believe this,” Shin thought. “She’s running on about a ‘Mountain of Flame’ and the birth of a baby that was supposed to have taken place in the year one thousand something like it was yesterday and this is 20—”
“This is the year two thousand twelve,” Princess Iron Fan interrupted.
“My God, she’s finishing my thoughts for me. Is she actually reading my mind? O.K. if we’re going to play games, then read this” Shin formed a question mentally. “Where are Monk Tάng and the fellowship now? Weren't they supposed to have finished their journey to the west one thousand years ago?" The princess didn’t miss a beat.
"After they left the Mountain of Flame, they came forward in time to this place, America, through the crystal mirror of the future. Monk Tάng is now in Chicago, Monkey King is in New York. Friar Sand is on his way to the White House. Pigsy has gone to Las Vegas, and White Dragon is in Hollywood.”
“Shit, this is starting to get more than a little creepy,” thought Shin. He was remembering the mirror in his nightmare. He was beginning to wonder if he weren’t still stuck in his nightmare. First, he survives a gigantic earthquake that must have taken out eighty per cent of L.A., but he doesn’t hear or see a single person moving about in the aftermath. And now he is having a wordless conversation with a thousand year-old fantasy woman floating in mid-air. “I must be dreaming.” He glanced up at the Princess to see her nodding in agreement. Shin broke out in a cold sweat."
“Yes, you are dreaming—more than twenty years in the future,” she said. “You are in the nightmare of the great earthquake.” Her voice rose to a level of urgency: “Shin Sun, I warn you, do not wake up! Not yet. You…are…—" The princess hesitated. She hadn’t the heart to tell him the thing he would want to know next. But Shin’s mind was not even forming the question. Shin was looking intently at the sleeping boy. He was beautiful. Shin even thought he could see clusters of lights surrounding its little body.
His tone softened: “Who is the father? Which one of the fellowship was he?” Shin wondered silently. “White Dragon?” Shin recalled that in the ancient story the young White Dragon was an unholy terror. He once ignited the fire of an undersea volcano and burned the West Sea palace to the ground. The fabled luminous pearls housed inside were all destroyed. For this he was sentenced to join the west journey fellowship. In rebellion, White Dragon ate Monk Tang's horse. As punishment, the gods transformed him into a horse and compelled him to serve the Monk. “No, it couldn’t be White Dragon," Shin concluded. Princess Iron Fan was still following his thoughts, but said nothing.
“What about Pigsy? Shin ventured. “He wasn’t always a buffoon with the face of a pig.” Once he was marshal of all the water gods living in the Milky Way. There had been a grand party given, the Fairy Peach Cotillion. At that party, Pigsy got drunk and dared to mock the Goddess of the Moon herself. For this outrage he was cast down to earth, changed into a pig, and forced to join the quest. Later, in the course of the journey, Pigsy contrived a scheme to marry a beautiful maiden he had met, but his plans were thwarted by the Monkey King. Shin decided he had to rule out Pigsy too.
By this time, he had become completely absorbed by the problem of the father’s identity. The princess said nothing. “What about Friar Sand?” He was a man of the cloth—more devout even than Monk Tang—and a former general in the Celestial Army. He too was hurled to earth (condemned to guard the River of Quick Sand) because of his unruliness at the Fairy Peach Cotillion. Friar Sand’s crime was that he shattered the exquisite crystal ceiling of the pavilion where the festivities were being held. Shin remembered that in the old story certain of the shards from that ceiling dropped all the way to earth and formed mineral deposits of unbelievable richness.
As guardian of the river, Friar Sand showed no mercy to passersby. Nine different monks tried to cross and were drowned in quick sand. Friar Sand wore their tiny skulls on a necklace he made. Monk Tang, however, was more fortunate than they. He had the help of the fellowship. “No, Friar Sand cannot be the father,” thought Shin.
“But then if not him, who? And why am I—” Shin aimed his thought directly at Princess Iron Fan. “Why am I the one to deliver your baby to its father?” The Princess’ answer was more a riddle than an answer: “My son will not wake until he is delivered into his father's hands, but when his eyes open again, everyone will know who his father is.”
Bewildered, Shin spoke aloud, “Princess, you are immortal. You have extraordinary powers. Why can’t you deliver the baby yourself?”
"If I could do that, I would keep him and rear him,” she replied with a trace of bitterness. Then the Princess made a swift gesture toward Shin with one arm extended, fingers together. She held the child in the other. The night air began to stir. Shin shivered. He watched in amazement as a shaft of silver-blue light sprang from the tips of the Princess’ fingers. The light rushed toward him, like the shaft of an immense sword, stopping only a few feet from the railing of his terrace. Then individual rays began to fan out in both directions like the fin of some great luminous fish. Its surface appeared to be molten metal, white-hot and icy all at once. It spread itself into the pleated form of a giant palm branch, the ragged ends of its rays, like silver threads, fluttering in the breeze.
Princess Iron Fan relaxed her arm. The palm-leaf became solid metal, thin as foil, no longer glowing with light but reflecting the sky all around it. Like the Princess, it floated in mid-air just above Shin’s terrace. The Princess motioned for the doctor to approach. Shin moved to the railing and started to climb over it. Instantly the palm leaf fan came toward him. It startled him. He hesitated. Looking down, he remembered that he was seventeen stories above the pavement.
Still straddling the rail, Shin was paralyzed with fear. The Princess was growing impatient. With one great sudden wafting motion, the iron palm fan blew Shin off the railing into the air and drew him back into its wake. Effortlessly it caught the doctor, but Shin’s landing was surprisingly hard. “Shit, that really hurt, even if I am dreaming. This is no soft magic carpet,” he complained.
The Princess laughed a little at Shin’s clumsiness. "The iron fan will accompany you until you understand why it is that you were chosen." She looked down at her child and leaned forward to place a kiss upon its cheek. Then she unfolded her arms and allowed him to float gently toward Shin. Shin Sun still had a hundred questions for the princess, but somehow the moment for questioning was past. Shin reached out and embraced the baby, still in deep sleep.
Underneath them both, Shin felt the fan moving away from the terrace. Then, all of a sudden, the fan set out on its own course, speeding away with the two of them on top. Shin cried out in surprise as the fan carried them higher and higher above the wasted city. Dark wind whistled by them as they flew. Shin had the compulsion to crouch down close to the fan’s surface to avoid being blown off. There was nothing to hold onto, and he had the child besides. Soon he realized that his feet gripped the palm fan’s metal surface as if they were magnetic. He couldn’t fall off if he wanted. He had no choice now but to relax and enjoy the ride since the Princess and her palm fan seemed to have everything tightly under control.
Off they flew, high above the destruction, high above the ground where everyone lay dead. Perhaps they weren’t really dead but lost, like Shin, in a vast, unending dream.
The princess kept her eyes on the fan until it vanished into the horizon. Time was running out. It was almost dawn. Princess Iron Fan sighed and began her long, slow descent to the ground.
Downward she sank, passing floor after floor of the high-rise. As an afterthought, she looked up at Shin’s building. “Didn’t it seem odd to Shin that his was the only building left standing in the immediate vicinity, the only one to escape the quake without any damage?” she wondered. Now the illusion was no longer necessary. Without surprise, she watched as its solid walls melted into thin air until there was nothing. On the spot where an impressive tower of glass, metal, and concrete had stood there was now a large mound of rubble.
The princess halted just above it. In deference to her person, chunks of rock and steel moved out of her path and rearranged themselves around her, forming a kind of circular wall, like the shaft of an enormous well. She continued her descent. When her feet touched the bottom of the circle she spotted the thing she was looking for. It was the Ti Yi crystal glowing faintly in the dark. She walked gravely toward it. At her approach, the glow from the crystal flared up to reveal the rumpled form of something nearby. There next to the crystal lay the mangled body of Shin Sun, who had been buried under the rubble!
The princess stooped to retrieve the crystal. Then turning to Dr. Sun, she knelt gently beside him, took his hand, and wrapped his dead fingers around the stone. A moment later the body began to regenerate. Broken bones straightened and healed. Wounds closed and abrasions faded. The princess took the crystal out of his hand and inserted it under Shin’s tongue. Color returned to Shin’s face.
Unexpectedly, a cellular phone began to ring. Guided by the sound of its preset musical tone, the princess found it tucked into Shin’s breast pocket. She took it out and looked at it curiously. It continued to ring. Perplexed, she held it away from herself and circled her finger around the case. Long strands of luminescent numerals and characters unfurled f. These arranged themselves in front of her, creating a kind of cryptograph written on thin air which the princess seemed to be able to decipher. Satisfied, she waved the whole thing away with one hand and brought up the sound with another. She listened carefully to find among millions of voices in simultaneous conversations the right one:
“Hello, Shin? Are you there? We heard the news about the quake early this morning. Did it hit your building? Are you all right? Shin, this is Debra. Robert and I are a couple of nervous wrecks wondering if you’re O.K.”
“Debra” answered the princess, hoarsely mimicking Shin Sun’s baritone. “Wait, please.” Princess Iron Fan then spread herself over Dr. Sun’s lifeless body, first touching her forehead to his, then merging her entire body into his. Shin’s eyes opened. He sat up reaching for the cell phone. It flew immediately to his palm. Now he understood its operation. “Debra,” he said, this time in Shin’s authentic voice, “this is Hermit.”
“Who?”
“Hermit Sun. Shin’s twin brother. He must have told you about me. Listen, can you put Robert on the phone? I got a message from Shin.” The doctor waited briefly. Then a voice came on the line.
“This is Robert.”
“Hi, I’m Shin’s brother, Hermit. There’s a hell of a lot that’s happened around here, but promised Shin I’d get his message to you. He’s out on urgent business right now.”
“What is it?”
“He wanted me to tell you to struck gold!
the Deep Wide gold mine and the Titanium-Yttrium Crystal was unearthed by the quake..."
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letter to the agent, then answer the following 8 questions as the
introduction of 5 characters in the fellowship of "West Journey" team.
(Everybody named the book as "Journey to the west", but we will rename it as
"West Journey" afterward.) We r writing Book 3 of Monkey King and Monk Tang's American West Journey. Monkey King and his team mates come to future USA of year 2012 through "The Mirror of Future". Book 1 "The West Journey" is over thousand years old, u shall learn who is Monkey King in Chapter 1 to 7 of Book 1. If my translation doesn't really help u to answer, there r some more in preChapter and the letter to agents. U can find the story of Iron-fan Princess at Flame Mountain in chapter 59 to 61. Book 2 "The enlarged West Journey" is over 300 years old. U can find the story of "The Future Mirror" in chapter 8 to 10. |
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dream. And actually it's a nightmare, beginning with West Journey Team (White Dragon' Pigsy' Friar Sand' Monk Tάng and Monkey King) come to USA 2012, in the night of L.A. Big One. 2.Who is Monkey King? 3.Who is White Dragon? 4.Who is Pigsy? 5.Who is Friar Sand? 6.Who is Monk Tang? 7.Who is manipulate Monkey King's dream? since when? why and how? What's supposed to happen in this dream? 8.What happened in Flame Mountain? Who is Iron-Fan Princess? The original novel [West Journey] was based on historical fact of Xuan2 Zhuang4 (596 AD) seeking Buddhist scriptures in the West during the Tάng Dynasty (627 AD). Monky King was a stone monkey conceived by a fairy stone in the Flower-Fruit Mountain, the monkeys crowned him as king because he dared to jump into the waterfall and found a marvulus kingdom there. After over years of seeing moneys getting old' sick and died, in order to compete with the lifespan of heaven and earth and achieve immortality, Monkey King left home and was apprenticed to Bodhi thus named Sun-Wù-Kong 孫悟空 meaning "Pondering on emptiness". After he obtained the powerful golden cudgel, a gift from Dragon King Ao2 Guang3 of the East Sea, he immediately claimed himself a saint that enjoyed equal power with heaven. Jade Emperor appointed Monkey King as Stable Assister, Monkey King stole and ate most of panacea pills from the Heaven Pharmacy and ruined Jade Empress's Fairy Peach Party. Emperor pharmaceutist cooked him in the stove and tried to smelt him and get the panacea pills back. Monkey King escaped from the torture, his eyes become fire eyeballs and golden pupil. The flames of pharmacy stove dropped onto earth and created the Mountain Flame. Later, Monkey King had to be pressed under Wu3-Hang2 Mountain 五行山 for 500 years for stirring up trouble in the heavenly palace Monk Tάng worked off the incantation on Monkey King and took him as a disciple. The followship of the West Journey eventualy joined by WHite Dragon' Pigsy and Friar Sand. the White-Dragon Horse was caught in the Eagle-Scared Ravine, Originally the son of Dragon King Ao2 Jin4 in the State of Guang in the West Sea, he committed arson and burned the bright pearls. For this crime he was sentenced to death but later rescued by Buddha, who turned him into a horse to serve Monk Tang2. Pigsy was originally a marshal of Water God in the Milky Way. After assailing and harassed the Moon Goddess at the Fairy Peach Party while he was drunk, the marshal was demoted onto the earth and turned into the form of a pig. Friar Sand also used to be a general of Heaven Army. He was demoted onto the earth and fell into Quick Sand River for breaking the Ti-Yi crystal glass roof at the Fairy Peach Party. (It's actually Monkey King's fault for starting the fight.) As Monkey King wandered into the further future. He paused at the years of the 21st century, Monk Tάng and his team will therefore suddenly find themselves in "America ", a land commonly known as "Beautiful Land" of dream. Nevertheless, Monk Tάng and his team soon became swollen-headed, fallen into illusion and frame-up of the Demon Lust. Mackerel Spirit (The Demon Lust) as mentioned earlier intended to take advantage of the situation. His immediate target was always Monkey King. Again, Mackerel let Monkey King develop his desire and let it go wild in his dreams. He then planned to corrupt him while he was going deeper and deeper in his self-indulgent dream. The whole story takes place in Monkey King's dream.
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Preface PROLOGUE: TWO DECADES OF AN AMERICAN DREAM; COMING OF NEW LIFE CARRIED BY THE WIND OF THE PALM-LEAF-FAN. Earth was quiet once again; streams of night air rift through the murky
sky. Dr. Shin Sun stands high above the rooftop, gazing upon the silent
night of Los Angeles, over the great city, as if he was floating on top of
it. Barking only once, a miserable old dog challenges the silent night; after
taking a long pause, he abruptly breaks the lifeless night sky with his
continuous howling.
As she lowers herself to the ground, magically, the scraps and debris of the building beneath move aside forming a circular wall around her. What is left in this circle is just what she is looking for; she lands and slowly walks towards it. It was a Ti4-Yi3 crystal, and lying next to it is Dr. Shin Sun's mangled corpse! She picks up the crystal and places it in the corpse's palm. Almost immediately, the corpse began regenerating and healing itself. Wounds began to close-up and eroded particles of the flesh regenerated as she watched. She takes the crystal out of the palm and inserts it beneath the corpse's tongue. Blood filled veins filled in around the corpse's face. "Ring---” Out of the blue, a cellular phone starts ringing with a preset musical tone, that catches the Princess' attention. She finds it, picks it up as the ring begins to lower. With a perplexed look, the Princess raises and circles her finger around the cellular phone. In thin air, the phones display appears exaggerated in size. Along with the garbled sounds of static, she is hearing thousands of people talking over the device. She listens very carefully to eliminate and distinguish the background conversation, from the loudest female's voice that seems to want to talk to her: "Shin? We understand the big one did strike your city! Are you OK? Shin?... We heard the news! Shin? Was the quake close to your house?!... This is Debra and Robert..." "Debra," the princess says in a thick male's voice, but immediately frowns and adds, "Wait, ..." She walks and disappeared into Shin Sun's corpse. Shin's corpse becomes alive again, raises, and opens the eyes. He took out the Ti-Yi Crystal beneath his tongue, now it's Shin's own talking voice. " May I speak with Robert, please?" He raises his hand; the cellular phone shrinks and flies back into his palm. Instantly, it seems he learns and is able to use the device. He clicks the key pad and begins talking into the phone: "This is Hermit Sun, Shin's twin brother. He is out for an urgent delivery. He wanted me to tell you, the Deep Wide gold mine and the Titanium-Yttrium Crystal was unearthed by the quake..."
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Since Movie One story is starting pre-face (Iron-Fan Princeee asked Dr.Sun
to delivery the baby), ending at chapter 8, Monkey King got his son back
through help of Dragon' Pigsy and Friar Sand. We actually need to finish
chapter 0 to chapter 8. So when we have first 6 chapter ready to submit to
DWGroup, we will be only 3 more chapters to see the movie One is on.
Since all editors' publishers' 3-d artist and producre r waiting to see
the story outline, We shall join the group and learn Dramatica to convert
the story outline from chapter 0 to chapter 5, or chapter 6 is better.
And we only need to finish the Dramatica story outline "Complete done"
upto chapter 8! because that's the whole thing we need at Movie ONE!
I need to have chapter 0 upto chapter 6 done to be published at least 4
chinese newspapers, there r over 5,000 newspapers in China 'Taiwan and
USA, we never know how many HUNDRED papers and magazines will publish it
as daily series, when we have 3-d comic ready, we surely able to get
published over Thousands of editor and publisher's daily series. I will
try to be published over the other language (And with 3-d comic, it's easy
to be translate), Most of the world know Monkey King over thousand years,
the same as the world know Superman over 80 years.
So whatever we need to do to see it's happen, is to finish up to chapter
8.
Please try to write the complte detail story line of chapter 4 into your
own style of csample chapter, I won't say anything about your writing,
let's submit it to the DWGroup and let the Writers review it and hear what
they will say, about chapter 0 to chapter 5, and learn the Dramatica to
convert story outline, to finsh upto chapter 8.
To see if u can work on finish one chapter each week.
The good news is that we actually only need to finish the REAL chapter
upto chapter 8.
But we do need to finish the whole story outline from cover to cover. 25
chapters.
And we need to finish the story outline in second version' complete and
detailed up to chaper 8 too.
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